Ashley Purdy - Uncoloured

So, here's my uncoloured, unrevised drawing of Ashley Purdy, the bassist of Black Veil Brides... How you you think it's turned out? I'm not entirely sure :L
The list
Dahvie Vanity 1st sketch - [link]
Dahvie Vanity - [link]
Jayy Von Monroe 1st sketch - [link]
Jayy Von Monroe -[link]
Andrew Biersack 1st sketch - [link]
Andrew Biersack - [link]
Ashley Purdy 1st sketch - HERE!
Ashley Purdy - [link]
Jake Pitts 1st sketch -[link]
Jake Pitts - [link]
Jinxx 1st sketch -[link]
Jinxx - [link]
CC 1st sketch - [link]
CC - [link]
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-DemiMajestics